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Tell me what you *really* think

This tiny story is the one I'm supposed to be reading at the Bastard Sons of Burn Night on the 24th. I'm starting to get cold feet about performing anything of mine in public, so I'd appreciate any comments on it.

Oh, and it's living in the journal I use for my creative writing, which I am trying to resurrect, and which you're welcome to read and comment on, though it doesn't get updated very often.

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lovingboth
14th Jan, 2002 15:10 (UTC)
Naughty but nice. I wasn't sure about the last para at first, partly in comparison to the preceeding one, but it grows on you.

I remember the city and the conference better than most of the German attendees... including the somewhat surreal discussion of the UK bi scene there.
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